Friday, December 29, 2006

Snow Riding

four wheels glide through fresh fallen snow still falling
two riders crank to keep commitments with end of year deadlines
they rejoice at the wilderness they otherwise would have avoided
on a day with storm warnings

Thanks Calvin.

- Peace

2 comments:

PsySal said...

Interesting, on the way home I started to write a poem, very similar to yours... I think I got stuck when I realized "freshly fallen snow" had been done before. :-)

Dave King said...

I guess it just doesn't occur to me to self edit that much.

- Peace